Tuesday, 21 June 2016

Autumn Personifacation Poem



My Reflection

Walt : edit and revise my writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback and self-reviewing and assessing.


I was able to re-craft my autumn poem because I changed that mean the same to more interesting words like burrow, Splash.
Next time I need to re-read my writing often so that I don’t miss out words and so that my sentences make sense.

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