Wednesday, 4 March 2015

Did You Ever Poem 2015



My Reflection
I am proud to find good words (like cawing and breaking) for my did you ever poem.

I was successful because I stuck to the poem model.  I did use fragments to give my readers a good picture and I used some the senses.  It was tricky to find words to put into my did you ever poem.



1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I can tell that you enjoyed your holiday in Waihi a lot. I like how you described the birds as 'cawing'.
Next time, remember to put 'I loved it' on the end.